Revisions and Revise

Revisions and Revise

This is why I wanted to rewrite my community paper, and hope that I can make this right. I really thought I did well on this paper however, I was missing the whole point of the assignment, and I did not add my interview questions. The assignment was this assignment focuses on strengthening your skills in analysis—showing how and why something works the way it does. The general purpose is to help us understand how communities work. In addition, as a rhetorical strategy, we are asking you to demonstrate skills in presenting concrete and specific examples to help us see—the old “show me, don’t tell me” message.Rather than analysis and synthesis, it was narrative and definition with a lot of overuse of “you”. I did have a lot of problems trying to come up with this paper.